BONUS PAGE

Pacing Checklist

September 10, 2025

1. Action and Momentum

• Does your story start with an engaging moment or event that grabs the reader’s attention?

• Do your action scenes feel quick and exciting? (Tip: Use short sentences and avoid too much description.)

• Are there moments where the story slows down for reflection or character development?

2. Balance Between Fast and Slow Moments

• Does your story have a mix of fast-paced scenes (action, tension, dialogue) and slower-paced scenes (description, introspection, backstory)?

• After an intense scene, do you include a quieter moment to let the reader catch their breath?

• Does the pace feel consistent, or do some sections feel too rushed or too slow?

3. Scene Length and Placement

• Are your scenes the right length for their purpose? (Short for action, longer for emotional depth or worldbuilding.)

• Do your scenes flow logically from one to the next?

• Are there any scenes that feel unnecessary or drag the story down?

4. Sentence Structure

• Are you varying your sentence lengths? (Short sentences for urgency, longer ones for reflection.)

• Do your sentences match the tone of the scene? (Fast and punchy for action, slower and descriptive for calm moments.)

5. Emotional Engagement

• Are there moments where the reader can connect emotionally with your characters? (Slow pacing works well for this.)

• Do your fast-paced moments create tension and excitement?

6. Testing Your Pacing

• Have you read your story out loud? Does the pacing feel natural when spoken?

• Have you asked someone else to read your story and give feedback on whether it feels too fast or too slow?

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